an attempt

الادمرال

an attempt

Hey all my friends
I want to add something new
I'v written poem by English but with arabic poem style (rhyme,meter.even the song of it
It might be good,,or not
so to enjoy with it,,i recommend you dear reader to read it with the accent of English language
and sing it..at that u will know what i mean
Otherwise,you will think the poem shorter or longer the way which has to be

She called me, honey,sinc then = all I want to hear it again
I would have told everyone = to explain what doe's she mean
I don't know what I have done = I don't know where I have been
something on her eyes hidden = as she said,no more pain
go with me,lover just run = from my heart to my vein
really I love her even = she didn't say it again
she my moon,she my sun = she the sky of my rain

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Hhhhhhhhhhhhh
Its so funny
I make a funny song when I read your wonderfull poem

Great work and nice idea


I don't know what I have done = I don't know where I have been
something on her eyes hidden = as she said,no more pain

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wow i enjoy it really i love the way u write it
on the arabic why but in english words
really i enjoy reading it

thank u
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Very Excellent
Beautiful poem wonderful the method
Thank you

hahahaha you make your own arabic style by this poem.
Good attemppet and invnention but it will be so beautiful if you use the english rules and style in yours next poem.
Thanks.

dear Brother
Aladmral
good idea
To write a poem in English
but Arabic poem style
Governed rhyme

Wonderful poem

Thank you

Admiral I think you're finished sailing in the Arabian Sea
And YOU began sailing in the West Sea.

Now I understand why your name Admiral